new template.net form...

jtaylor at cac.washington.edu jtaylor at cac.washington.edu
Fri Aug 21 23:19:53 UTC 1992


|     Though I'm not sure about the distinction you are making between
|     "complies" and "will comply".  
| You're right: the words "that will transit the NSFNET backbone"
| makes "will comply" superfluous, so "complies" will do.
| 
|     But I will run it by some others here just to be sure we aren't
|     taking the law unto ourselves, so to speak.  
| Of course!
| 
| OK, after this first pass through the text, I'm getting
| even more picky: networks cannot agree to anything, only
| their administrators can! So here's my latest & greatest
| proposal for a new text:
| 
|      The administrators of the following networks for which access is
|      requested to the NSFNET backbone,  agree that traffic from these
|      networks that will transit the NSFNET backbone complies with the
|      "NSFNET BACKBONE SERVICES ACCEPTABLE USE POLICY" dated June 1992
| 
| 	Piet

There is a missing comma.  One should be placed after the word "networks"
on the first line.





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