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jtaylor at cac.washington.edu
jtaylor at cac.washington.edu
Fri Aug 21 23:19:53 UTC 1992
| Though I'm not sure about the distinction you are making between
| "complies" and "will comply".
| You're right: the words "that will transit the NSFNET backbone"
| makes "will comply" superfluous, so "complies" will do.
|
| But I will run it by some others here just to be sure we aren't
| taking the law unto ourselves, so to speak.
| Of course!
|
| OK, after this first pass through the text, I'm getting
| even more picky: networks cannot agree to anything, only
| their administrators can! So here's my latest & greatest
| proposal for a new text:
|
| The administrators of the following networks for which access is
| requested to the NSFNET backbone, agree that traffic from these
| networks that will transit the NSFNET backbone complies with the
| "NSFNET BACKBONE SERVICES ACCEPTABLE USE POLICY" dated June 1992
|
| Piet
There is a missing comma. One should be placed after the word "networks"
on the first line.
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